An email from Natasha, my teacher at the Detroit Film Center is in red:
Hey Jay! Congratulations on your film showing! Great story! did you write it alone? where did that come from?
Well, I wanted to have as many reasons as possible for the Detroit Film Festival to take the movie. There was a slot free on latin night so everything about the story came from that. Latin actors, dialogue in spanish, Mexicantown location, and as many references to Pedro Almodovar as possible (priest, strong women, drugs, transvestite). I just needed to write & weave all those things together.
I LOVED robert’s part – really comedic.
Yes, Robert was the best thing about the film.
WHY WERE THE WHITE’S SO BLOWN OUT!!??? Your exposure was AHH!!! your F-stop open too too much
Well, I didn’t know as much as I do now about such things and, as I said in an earlier post, I scouted the location at a very different time of day when the lighting was nowhere near as bright (another novice mistake).
The actors where a little on the dry side- the mom mainly. The kids were actually pretty good. i think you already knew this….
Yes, all true and noticed by many but as I’ve also said before, there were things I could have done (there are lists in earlier posts) to improve their performance but didn’t.
LOVED the opening scene with the photo album.
Really? Thanks. That was kind of a last minute idea. I was unsure about it and wondered if it was too long.
LOVED highlighting that it WAS detroit
I’m glad no one made fun of my use of Google Earth.
So basically, your overall idea was fabulous.. it was just your production side that needed improvement but when you have such a great story, people overlook that.
I’m glad everyone likes the script as much as I do. I’m very proud of it.
BUT FOR NEXT TIME, don’t try to do everything alone.
I was warned about that but I honestly thought I could be the next Robert Rodriguez and everything would come out perfect with only me and no budget.
Now you have a pool of people to pick from all from DV1.
I really hope I get to work with Jose. I need to email him about some projects we discussed.
i’m really glad i met you cause i would love to help you out on anything.
I feel the same way. I’ve developed a small handful of people I will call with every idea.
the kids loved working with you too! i am sure they would love to continue working with you as well!
I’ve already got ideas in mind. Though I, actually, may snatch up Reynaldy’s dad first! That particular idea is the one I keep writing about having “writer’s block” with.